The theme is Romance, wake up those cobwelled filled roses in your head and smell the sweet scent as you create a story that yanks a small bit on that soulmate chain covered in gold!!!!! <3
I stared into their eyes and only saw love and wonder. They had beautiful eyes, a blue-green that could only be compared to the ocean. As I closed my eyes I felt a tingling in my heart, and I knew it was because I was beside them. They reached their hand ever so slowely and entertwined their fingers with mine. A slow, satisfied smile crept across my face and suddenly, without any warning their lips were warm and tender on mine. I kissed back with a roaring passion until------
until I remembered who he was, and where we were. He, Roberto, was my best friend's boyfriend, and we were in our apartment, - the one I shared with my BFF Sonia. Lately, Sonia and Roberto's relationship had fizzled. They had been more off than on. And it was during this time, that the attraction between Roberto and myself became apparent. We had always been kindred spirits, but lately we'd been drawn to each other like moths to a flame. But tonight----
ReplyDelete, it was all a dream. I suddenly awoke from a lustrous dream. My body sweats as if I thought it was all real. The very thought of cheating on my BFF was way out of line. But the more I thought of Roberto, the more I wanted him. He is like my forbidden apple but with warm rugged muscles to be wrapped around with. Then ----
ReplyDeleteThen the unthinkable happened my BFF called god he always had horrible timing how was I going to tell him that the man who he loved wanted something else entirely I....
ReplyDelete"How was I going to tell him that the man he loved wanting something entirely I" could give him. And that even if we could make a threesome kinky activity, there never would be satisfying feelings since our very actions would end in the quay blocking of the genders!It never would do...
ReplyDelete(Apart) This events seem not in line with the rules of the "exquisite cadavers" (as this literary form is called) since there are many loose ends not relative to the main stream of the plot, or if the idea was to make them part of the argument, they are so far from the main events, which are not many, that looks as if forced into it. I am talking about the generally out of way the genders are treated. This is only my idea, not the sacred opinion of a celebrated Literary genius, of course!) :))
Hmmm the BFF is Sonia I believe....therefore u r right Odliam haha so if a new poster posts, start off from Abduls post, thank you :)
ReplyDeleteSo what happens to this story?
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